Stargate Werewolves Continue? New People are welcomed

wolfman65 · Post by **wolfman65** » Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:22 am

The wolf walked behind the trees watching SG1. He silently watched them being chased.

Moon Daughter · Post by **Moon Daughter** » Tue Mar 14, 2006 6:46 pm

Um??? How are we gonna exactly begin this? Just jump right into this?

Anubis · Post by **Anubis** » Tue Mar 14, 2006 7:14 pm

yeah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too simple! it doesn't make sence or tell what the hell is going on? a two sentences long starting post wont cut it. so you might what to be more discriptive

Anook · Post by **Anook** » Sat May 20, 2006 2:37 pm

Well, its might be up to you guys to make the story more interesting. Isn't that why its called a role playing game

Your supposed to continue the story by using your characters. I think thats why he only put two sentences. He probably wanted you guys to add onto the story. So yea, just jump on in. One of you tell us whats going on.

Anook · Post by **Anook** » Sat May 20, 2006 3:07 pm

He wondered whether or not he should help them. He didn't like them being in his world to begin with. With his ears flat against his head he wondered why they had come here in the first place.
''Maybe I should help them" he said in a deep voice.
''Then they'll leave and the pack won't worry anymore"
His thoughts traveled through the dense forest back to his pack. They had all been on edge ever since SG1 had arrived. The werewolves were peaceful creatures, but they were only concern with the well being of the pack.

Ok hows that. This is my first time doing a role playing thing, so please give me your opinion. I write very good scary stories so something like this is new for me.

Anubis · Post by **Anubis** » Sat May 20, 2006 3:20 pm

((Much better!! But I'll give you some advice on writing. Never assume that the reader will figure it out. If you do that the reader is going to be frustrated with it. Allways be discriptive and give the most detail you can to piece to gether the world characters and stories.))

((I'll join in, but i don't want to play all of SG-1. I'll post if some else joins us and help take the load off))

Anook · Post by **Anook** » Sat May 20, 2006 4:20 pm

Yea I agree with you Anubis.
If other people join in then I'll continue to post too.
We need more creative minds to help the story out.
Well, if more people do decide to post ; then I'm going to have to watch SG1 because, I don't know any of the characters. I mean I've watched it once or twice, but I don't remember their names.

Oh, and thanks for the advice. I'll keep it in mind. I love it when people give me their opinions on my writing wherther its good or bad.