a werewolf story-planet of the wolves-chapter 1

[Anubis]

ok before you asume thats a rip off a planet of the apes well it's not even though some parts are simular. i just did this short story because i wanted to, ok? well here it is. i'm a novis at writting so please be kind.
please tell me what you think, i'm not about to waist my time on a story that people think that sucks.


"Anubis says to stay away from ruins let alone to go inside one of the steructures" Kapu warned.
"i just want to see whats in side."Raff explained as he pushed the weeds and vines away from the entertance of the bulilding.
they steped in side as thier eyes adjusted to the darkness.
"what is this place?" kapu asked
"i dont know
"Raff walked up to one of the walls and brushed the dust off of a red cross. " hu, i wonder this marking means?"
"kapu walked up to a steructer in the middle of the room. he looked at the sterange objects. running his clawed fingers on a box shaped rusted
metal item. he picked up a cermanic cup and sniffed it. the air blowing his from muzzle blew dust off making him coagh. as he finished his coaghing fit he noticed a green light coming from another room down the adjastant corridor.
"hey raff, look at this" raff turned his attention to Kapu.
"what is it?" he pointed to the room.
"lets go and check it out."
"lts not and say we did" kapu said.
"Don't be such a pup!"
"fine!"
Kapu and Raff entered the room. in it was ten strange objects that are tall as room and had long clear windows and one was on.
"what is it?" kapu asked as Raff dusted dusted of the window on one the machines.
"Kapu, do you now who built these ruins?"
"yea, humans, but they died off six hundred years ago. why you asked."
"because i've found one" he stand aside to let kapu look. in it was a human male.
"whoa! thats a human, its kind a ugly. kapu put his ear against the window.
"Its alive!"
"what!?"
"it has a heart beat!" Raff shoved Kapu aside to listen.
"how are we going to get him out?" Kapu asked raff kicked it. immedately the room was filled with a sound that brought the feeling of danger.
"shut it off!" kapu yelled
the liquid that summerged him begain to drain. when it was finished the window popped open and the sound stopped.
the human started to stir and then woke up.
"wha?" it said it looked at the two lycans.
"oh s***!" it said
"it can talk!?"kapu asked
"they can talk!?" the human yelled.
it stumbled out of the machine keeping it's back away from the wolf creatures.
"calm domn" raff said.
"it backed away from them.
"stay away from me!" the huaman warned. then ran out of the room.
"should we go after him?" kapu asked.
"no, but we can't leave him alone ether" he paused and said" you go get Anubis and i'll keep an eye out for him.
"right" Kapu an Raff ran out of the room.


chapter 2 is on its way.

[Raina The Werewolf Queen]

I like it. Keep going. try useing a thesorus. it will help.