First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

The place for anything at all...
Post Reply
User avatar
Scott Gardener
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 4731
Joined: Wed Dec 15, 2004 11:36 pm
Gender: Male
Mood: Excited
Location: Rockwall, Texas (and beyond infinity)
Contact:

First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

Post by Scott Gardener »

Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.

-----

Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.

"Cheerios?" she asked him.

"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.

-----

Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
Taking a Gestalt approach, since it's the "in" thing...
Figarou
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 13085
Joined: Sun Nov 28, 2004 5:27 am
Custom Title: Executive Producer (Red Victoria)
Gender: Male
Location: Tejas

Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

Post by Figarou »

Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.

-----

Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.

"Cheerios?" she asked him.

"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.

-----

Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available. :(
User avatar
Anubis
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 6429
Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:57 pm
Custom Title: Eletist Jerk
Gender: Male
Location: Crossroads, ganking a hordie lowbie.
Contact:

Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

Post by Anubis »

Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.

-----

Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.

"Cheerios?" she asked him.

"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.

-----
thats it!? ??
Last edited by Anubis on Wed Aug 03, 2005 6:23 pm, edited 2 times in total.
THE GAME

My Armory
Fenrir
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 4234
Joined: Mon May 16, 2005 8:17 pm
Location: Atlanta
Contact:

Post by Fenrir »

Since he didn't have much to go on he just worked with what he had,
"Nam Sibyllam quidem Cumis ego ipse oculis meis vidi in ampulla pendere et cul illi pueri dicerent 'Sibylla Ti cupisne' respondebat illa 'Cupio mortere'."

-Satyricon
User avatar
Aki
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 2595
Joined: Fri Feb 11, 2005 10:06 pm
Custom Title: Wolfblood
Gender: Male
Location: Massachusetts

Post by Aki »

Hehe.

No duckies? :o

:Duckietoss:
Image
Figarou
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 13085
Joined: Sun Nov 28, 2004 5:27 am
Custom Title: Executive Producer (Red Victoria)
Gender: Male
Location: Tejas

Post by Figarou »

(Based from the teaser trailer)


Jack shifts into a werewolf right in front of his girl friend.

With a shocked look on her face, she covers her mouth and steps away from Jack.

Jack, with a sad look on his face, looks at her when the other werewolf steps out of the shadows.

What seemed to be 3 werewolves turned out to be one. In his paws were duckies that also had glowing eyes!!

Jack tries to protect his girl!! Oh no!! To late!!

:ducktoss3:
Silverclaw
Moderator
Moderator
Posts: 3203
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:07 pm
Gender: Male
Mood: Meh...
Location: Where soul meets body

Post by Silverclaw »

Masterpieces! 8) :wink:
Fenrir
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 4234
Joined: Mon May 16, 2005 8:17 pm
Location: Atlanta
Contact:

Post by Fenrir »

Literature for the ages :lol:
"Nam Sibyllam quidem Cumis ego ipse oculis meis vidi in ampulla pendere et cul illi pueri dicerent 'Sibylla Ti cupisne' respondebat illa 'Cupio mortere'."

-Satyricon
User avatar
WereDog
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 412
Joined: Mon Jul 18, 2005 1:55 pm
Custom Title: Hell-hound From outer regions of pluto
Location: sweden

Post by WereDog »

are you planning to release a book with this?

id pre-order it :lol:
User avatar
Trinity
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 840
Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:46 pm
Custom Title: Midnite artist what arts at midnite!
Mood: Excited
Location: East Coast USA: NJ/PA/DE
Contact:

Post by Trinity »

heh.

``````

Jack is brought before the Elders. The group is solemn and serious looking. It does not bode well.

"There are reason why we don't show ourselves to humans, and why we try not to interferr in their lives," says the oldest amoung them. Her face is a mix of pity, sadness and angr.

"I know..," Jack tries to explain but is cut off by one of the other Elders.

"But Nothing Jack! You were told. It was drilled into your head time and again! How dare you?! You trheaten our saftey as a whole, and thus you threaten our lives.., our very existence. I'm tired of the excuses, the whining, the promises that things will be okay."

He looks horrified and angry at the same time, its actually rather comical in a way. Jack might have laughed had he not known better. The Elder pauses in his rant.., then stalks away full of fury.

Then a whistling sound courses through the air. All eyes look skyward.

The female what spoke first points and yells," See Jack! See what your meddling has done!!"

:duckbomb:
:wolfpaint:
LinkedIn - Dev Art - Behance - Facebook Page
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She-wolf who stalked the forums when all else sane, slept.
Silverclaw
Moderator
Moderator
Posts: 3203
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:07 pm
Gender: Male
Mood: Meh...
Location: Where soul meets body

Post by Silverclaw »

:lol: :lol: :lol:
Searif
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 1232
Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2005 3:54 pm
Gender: Male
Location: Gravenhurst, Ontario

Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

Post by Searif »

Figarou wrote:
Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.

-----

Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.

"Cheerios?" she asked him.

"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.

-----

Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available. :(
why dont you make your own brand, figarou's fruit brute :D
Image
Fenrir
Legendary
Legendary
Posts: 4234
Joined: Mon May 16, 2005 8:17 pm
Location: Atlanta
Contact:

Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!

Post by Fenrir »

Searif Bogard wrote:
Figarou wrote:
Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.

-----

Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.

"Cheerios?" she asked him.

"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.

-----

Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available. :(
why dont you make your own brand, figarou's fruit brute :D
Free Figarou grade throwing duckie with every purchase 8)
Post Reply