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First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 4:24 pm
by Scott Gardener
Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.
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Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.
"Cheerios?" she asked him.
"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.
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Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 4:25 pm
by Figarou
Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.
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Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.
"Cheerios?" she asked him.
"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.
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Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available.
Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 6:13 pm
by Anubis
Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.
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Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.
"Cheerios?" she asked him.
"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.
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thats it!?
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 6:15 pm
by Fenrir
Since he didn't have much to go on he just worked with what he had,
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 7:57 am
by Aki
Hehe.
No duckies?
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 12:04 pm
by Figarou
(Based from the teaser trailer)
Jack shifts into a werewolf right in front of his girl friend.
With a shocked look on her face, she covers her mouth and steps away from Jack.
Jack, with a sad look on his face, looks at her when the other werewolf steps out of the shadows.
What seemed to be 3 werewolves turned out to be one. In his paws were duckies that also had glowing eyes!!
Jack tries to protect his girl!! Oh no!! To late!!
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 1:44 pm
by Silverclaw
Masterpieces!
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 1:45 pm
by Fenrir
Literature for the ages
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 6:14 pm
by WereDog
are you planning to release a book with this?
id pre-order it
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 3:08 am
by Trinity
heh.
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Jack is brought before the Elders. The group is solemn and serious looking. It does not bode well.
"There are reason why we don't show ourselves to humans, and why we try not to interferr in their lives," says the oldest amoung them. Her face is a mix of pity, sadness and angr.
"I know..," Jack tries to explain but is cut off by one of the other Elders.
"But Nothing Jack! You were told. It was drilled into your head time and again! How dare you?! You trheaten our saftey as a whole, and thus you threaten our lives.., our very existence. I'm tired of the excuses, the whining, the promises that things will be okay."
He looks horrified and angry at the same time, its actually rather comical in a way. Jack might have laughed had he not known better. The Elder pauses in his rant.., then stalks away full of fury.
Then a whistling sound courses through the air. All eyes look skyward.
The female what spoke first points and yells," See Jack! See what your meddling has done!!"
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:42 am
by Silverclaw
Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:00 pm
by Searif
Figarou wrote:Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.
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Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.
"Cheerios?" she asked him.
"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.
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Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available.
why dont you make your own brand, figarou's fruit brute
Re: First dibs on Freeborn fan fic!
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:01 pm
by Fenrir
Searif Bogard wrote:Figarou wrote:Scott Gardener wrote:Since the movie isn't out, and all we've seen so far is a teaser, it's kind of hard to come up with anything, but, here goes.
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Jack sat down and poured himself breakfast.
"Cheerios?" she asked him.
"You were expecting Fruit Brute?" He answered with a sigh.
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Story by Jonathan "Scott Gardener" Coolidge
Based on the "Freeborn" teaser by Anthony Brownrigg
Edited by J. Coolidge
"Cheerios" and "Fruit Brute" are trademarks of General Mills, Inc.
Inspired by The Pack
If only Fruit Brute was still available.
why dont you make your own brand, figarou's fruit brute
Free Figarou grade throwing duckie with every purchase