Arg.... (My video review of the teaser)

[Blue-eyes in the dark]

i think i may have made an a** of myself, recently i made a video response for the teaser of freeborn, though all of you may get to hear and see me, i think i may have made things a little harder for me now.

once i get the source, i'll post it on this topic.

[Lukas]

well we can't exactly answer that question until we get the video link

[Blue-eyes in the dark]

ok just a moment.......http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EOSXqYxvf5k

I sure hope it works

[Baphnedia]

Well, being as how I can't watch Youtube (being blind and deaf, or on a network that blocks youtube/google video specifically and streaming media generally); I apologize that my response is more than three characters long.

[Lukas]

ok now for my comment

1. don't smile at the end, it was creepy

2. you might have sounded more convincing if you took the time to think up some more reasons like Freeborn will succeed and possible even wrote it out before hand

3. its "pack" you pronounced "peck"


thats pretty much it

[Kaebora]

i changed the title of the thread to get more people to click on it. remember, the subject is what gets people to click the thread.

Not a bad review. It was an honest summery of your opinion.

[Howlitzer]

yeah, not bad for what it was... you can tell that you're very excited about it. But yes, you could be more convincing if you planned it out a bit better.

If you really want it to be more convincing, and this first video is bothering you that much... you can always do this:

- DELETE this video response....or just leave it and kinda just make a new one to "better explain" your excitement in the first one.

-Just like Lukas said----Sit down, think out your main points....and write out a good summary of everything you think Freeborn can/will be, why people should be interested in it, etc...

- Record a new video. Be honest, but don't just absolutely spill your guts without thinking it out first.

- Again...just like Lukas said...Don't do the freaky grin at the end. I can understand why you did, but it was still a wee bit freaky.

[Blue-eyes in the dark]

Thanks guys, and well the smile i seem to do every time I'm in front of a camera.

[Berserker]

This video epitomizes everything Youtube is about. Unfortunately, that's a bad thing.

I can only repeat the previous posters. Your video seems random, unorganized, and it isn't very convincing. I hope I'm not being too harsh, but I doubt anyone who stumbles across the video will be excited about Freeborn after they watch it. I give it a "D" for effort.

Honestly, I'm not sure if there's anything you can do to fix it. I think a long, well-written review or a blog outlining what you love about Freeborn and The Pack would be much better. Then you can spread it around.

[Blue-eyes in the dark]

ya, i tend to gush a bit much.